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LinkedIn Hand Raiser Post — Output Skill

What this produces: A ready-to-publish LinkedIn hand raiser post with CTA, optimized for authority, distribution, and conversion.

Output format: Text in a code block or saved as li-{{topic-slug}}-hand-raiser.md


Build Process

Step 0: Read Companion Files

  1. voice.md — Voice wins over all other rules
  2. audience.md — Who the reader is, what converts them
  3. soul.md — Why this brand exists
  4. offer.md — What Advisory OS sells

Step 1: Run the Intake

Walk through all eight decisions from 01-li-hand-raiser-context.md:

  1. CTA Type — Lead Shark comment trigger or workshop registration
  2. Asset / Event — What it is, who it's for, what it does, and the status angle
  3. Angle — Propose 2–3 with rationale
  4. Hook — Propose 2–3 opening lines
  5. Arc + CTA Transition — Section flow including where the shift happens
  6. Trigger Word — Propose 2–3 with status analysis for each
  7. Signature Block — Propose 2–3 positioning statements
  8. Format — Text post or carousel. Recommend based on material and CTA type.

For trigger word proposals, always include the status analysis:

After all decisions are locked, produce the Post Lock:

POST LOCK: [Working Title]
CTA type: [Lead Shark / Workshop registration]
Asset: [One sentence]
Angle: [Angle name]
Status angle: [What taking the action signals about the reader]
Hook: [Opening line]
Arc: [Section flow including CTA transition]
CTA: [Exact CTA text]
Trigger word: [KEYWORD]
Signature: [Positioning statement]
Format: [Text-only / Carousel]

Step 2: Write the First Pass

Before writing a single line:

  1. Select the golden example closest to your angle (03-golden-examples.md)
  2. Study its structural spine: How does it open? Where does the story or evidence live? When does the insight land? Is the value body scene-led or thesis-led?
  3. Write from that structure. The Post Lock tells you WHAT to write. The golden example tells you HOW.

The value body of a hand raiser IS thought leadership content. The same rule applies: if the body announces the insight in the opening and then illustrates it, the structure is backwards. Lead with scene, evidence, or recognition — let the insight emerge, then transition to the CTA.

Writing sequence:

  1. Write the hook exactly as locked
  2. Build the value body (70–80% of post) — match the golden example's delivery pattern, not a thesis-first lecture
  3. Write the CTA transition — spend time here, it's the hardest line
  4. Write the CTA (trigger or registration)
  5. Write the signature block
  6. Check total length: 1,500–2,600 characters
  7. Check value-to-CTA ratio: 70/30 to 80/20
  8. Read aloud — does the transition feel earned? Does the trigger word feel natural to comment?

The status test during writing: At every structural beat, ask: "What is the reader signaling about themselves by staying with this post?" The hook self-selects. The body elevates. The CTA converts. The trigger word broadcasts.

Step 3: Self-Check Before Delivering

Structural comparison (check FIRST — before anything else):

Authority checks:

Distribution checks:

Status checks:

Conversion checks:

Step 4: Flag Known Weaknesses

Step 5: Revision + QC

Pass 1 — Copy QC (copy-qc.md): All 11 patterns. Fix P1 and P2.

QC posture: fail-first. When a pattern is detected, the default is FAIL. To keep a flagged line, cite a specific golden example that uses the same structure and was annotated as acceptable in its Copy QC Notes. "I think it works here" is not sufficient — show the precedent or rewrite. If no golden example does the same thing, it fails.

Pass 2 — Sentence Editor (linkedin-sentence-editor.md): All 8 rules. Present changelog.


CTA Templates

Lead Shark Comment Trigger

[CTA transition — 1 line]
[Asset description — 1 sentence]

Comment [KEYWORD] and I'll send it.

I'm Kathryn Brown. I [positioning] for [audience] so [stakes].

Workshop Registration (Hybrid — Recommended)

[CTA transition — 1-2 lines]
[Event description — 1-2 sentences]

[Date] · [Time] · [Format]
[Who it's for — 1-3 segments]

Comment [KEYWORD] and I'll send the registration link.

I'm Kathryn Brown. I [positioning] for [audience] so [stakes].

Workshop Registration (Direct Link — Accept 60% Penalty)

[CTA transition — 1-2 lines]
[Event description — 1-2 sentences]

[Date] · [Time] · [Format]
[Who it's for — 1-3 segments]

Register: [link]

I'm Kathryn Brown. I [positioning] for [audience] so [stakes].

Angle-Specific Build Notes

Transformation Proof

Problem-Agitation

Behind the Curtain

Scarcity / Timing

Audience Segmentation

Results-First


Common First-Pass Mistakes

MistakeWhat to Do Instead
Trigger word is generic (RESOURCE, TOOL, INFO)Make it topic-specific and status-charged. TRIAGE, DECODER, DEPLOY.
Trigger word requires admitting a problem ("Comment HELP")Reframe as capability-seeking. TRIAGE = "I evaluate with rigor," not "I need help with prospects."
CTA transition feels like a sales pivotOne line connecting the insight to the asset. "I built a decoder for this."
Value body is a setup for the pitchThe body must work as standalone thought leadership. Test: remove the CTA. Is it still good?
Signature is a bio"I deploy scoring systems for advisory practices so your gut isn't making $44K decisions" — not "Founder of Advisory OS with 25 years of experience."
False scarcityEvery constraint must be real. "Only 3 spots" when there are 30 is a relationship-ending lie.
CTA section is 40%+ of the postTarget 20–30%. Body needs more substance.
Post only generates trigger comments, no discussionBody needs a more provocative claim or a more recognizable pattern.
Post has an external link60% penalty. Use hybrid comment trigger instead.
Audience segments are vague"Business owners who want growth" is everyone. "CEOs who want to transform how their company operates with AI" is someone specific who wants to BE that.
The reader wouldn't want their network to see them commentRedesign the trigger word and the post's status architecture. This is the core test.
Value body is thesis-led instead of scene-ledThe golden examples lead with scenes, evidence, or recognition patterns. If the body announces the insight first and then supports it, the structure is backwards. Rewrite scene-first.
QC rationalizes flagged patterns instead of failing themWhen copy-qc detects a pattern, the default is FAIL. Cite a golden example precedent to keep it, or rewrite. No rationalizing.